如何迅速提升高考作文檔次
高考英語(yǔ)作文一般滿分25分，如果作文達(dá)到19分，意味著已經(jīng)把好些考生拋在后面了，那如何拿到高分呢?
一. 首先看一下高考閱卷老師如何評(píng)分。
拿到你的作文，批卷老師大概讀一下，會(huì)在心中確立一個(gè)等級(jí)，一等是21分到25分，二等是16分到20分，三等是11分到15分......最要命的是，一旦老師心中確立了你的等級(jí)，就不愿意再更改了!也就是說(shuō)，接下來(lái)細(xì)看你作文寫得好壞，也只是在相應(yīng)等級(jí)內(nèi)變動(dòng)了! 所以說(shuō)，老師的一念之間，作文就會(huì)拉開等次!
這就要我們想盡一切辦法給老師留下一等文的第一印象!這樣，作文的分?jǐn)?shù)，一般只是在相應(yīng)等級(jí)內(nèi)變動(dòng)了。
二. 如何提升作文檔次
1.簡(jiǎn)單的改用一些單詞也會(huì)有意向不到的效果：如
用extraordinary代替very:十個(gè)人九個(gè)用very而你用extraordinary，那你不就與眾不同了嗎.
用significant代替important
用as a consequence代替as a result
用therefore代替so,舉個(gè)例子，I got up early，therefore i was late.
寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospital之類的形象詞。
簡(jiǎn)單的替換一下，水平立刻顯現(xiàn)出不一樣了
2.善用連接詞把短句改長(zhǎng)句
如，一個(gè)句子+逗號(hào)+however+另一個(gè)句子，這里面however是沒(méi)有實(shí)際意義的，就是表轉(zhuǎn)折，但你可以用這招把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句捏在一塊啊!短句子成長(zhǎng)句了!
都希望寫下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and，但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō)：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：Not only the furcoat is soft，but it is also warm.
◆其他連接詞：
表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，用 furthermore， what is more
表轉(zhuǎn)折：however/but 但是
表對(duì)比：not that but that不是而是/ one hand.on the other hand一方面另一 方面/ unlike與不同/not so much.as與其不如
表目的：for the.為了
表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以
表例證：for example
表假設(shè)：if 如果
表讓步：although雖然(注意：后不可接but!雖然但是不可這樣連用)/of course 當(dāng)然/clearly顯然
◆ 相關(guān)過(guò)渡語(yǔ)
1)表示時(shí)間順序： first， then， afterwards， meanwhile， later，first of all， finally， at last
2)表示空間順序： near， next to， far from， in front of， on the left， on one side
3)表示比較、對(duì)照： like， unlike， such as， but， however， on the other hand， on the contrary， nevertheless， otherwise
4)表示因果關(guān)系： because， for， as a result， therefore， thus
5)表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系： besides， whats more， what was worse， moreover， furthermore， in addition， on top of
6)表示并列關(guān)系： and， as well as， also
7)表示總結(jié)性： in general， in a word， in short， on the whole， to sum up， in brief， to conclude
3. 巧妙修改句式
舉個(gè)例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么說(shuō)?i not onle sing ，but also dance，改動(dòng)一下，not only do i sing，but also dance.倒裝句!
I think that...... 賓語(yǔ)從句，老師批10張卷子看到8張里面有I think that不煩嗎?如果一定要用賓語(yǔ)從句的話換一種說(shuō)法：I have a thought that......別看只改動(dòng)了一點(diǎn)，同位語(yǔ)從句!
同樣I hear that誰(shuí)都會(huì)用，不過(guò)同樣誰(shuí)都會(huì)用最好不要用!厲害一些的人會(huì)用：It is reported that...... 牛人會(huì)用There is a piece of news that 同樣的意思，但明顯比I hear that要帥!
還有一種用并列巨額代替定語(yǔ)從句，不僅可以用來(lái)湊字?jǐn)?shù)，還很醋。舉個(gè)例子，我喜歡玩籃球，然后籃球有很多種特點(diǎn)，就可以把這些特點(diǎn)用定語(yǔ)從句的形式并列出來(lái)：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is.......
還有種用法叫后置定語(yǔ)有人感覺挺難吧，其實(shí)記住個(gè)例子就行了，穿著比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini，變成a girls wearing a bikini就行了，這就是后置定語(yǔ)，很簡(jiǎn)單吧
最終的目的都是為了讓作文與眾不用，讓閱卷老師眼前一亮!
三.高考英語(yǔ)作文寫作時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)
1.減少誤拼
高考答題時(shí)，盡量別出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，要是比較長(zhǎng)的單詞拼錯(cuò)了還好說(shuō)，那種最簡(jiǎn)單的單詞千萬(wàn)不要拼錯(cuò)!扣的不是一分的問(wèn)題，有可能影響到等級(jí)。
2.注意卷面清爽，不要涂涂改改
現(xiàn)在高考改卷，是把每一塊分類用掃描儀掃描放到電腦里面。比如作文那一塊，會(huì)被單獨(dú)掃出來(lái)，放在電腦里以后，改卷的人看著投影儀上呈現(xiàn)出被放大了的段落，同時(shí)給出心里的分?jǐn)?shù)，按下想給的分?jǐn)?shù)。幾個(gè)人的分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)根據(jù)系統(tǒng)判斷，差別不大的話取平均值。差別大了，才會(huì)拉評(píng)分組組長(zhǎng)來(lái)看。(依舊是被屏幕放大了的字)。所以，字寫得好壞，一旦被放大，差別就不那么大了，最主要的是讓改試卷的看得清爽，眼睛不累。同時(shí)注意的是，最好不要涂涂改改，不然看起來(lái)覺得很不舒服，很麻煩。只要注意卷面清爽，就可以了。
五：最后分享一些可替換使用的單詞
1.occur 替換 think of
Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.
An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
2.devote替換spend
He spends all his spare time in reading.
He devotes all his spare time to reading.
3.seek替換want / look for
They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.
4.average 替換ordinary
Im an average ( ordinary ) student.
5.but替換very
The film we saw last night was very interesting.
The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.
The film we saw last night was anything but boring.
6.seat 替換sit
On his way to school， he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road， looking worried.
7.suppose 替換should
He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
8.appreciate 替換thank
Thank you very much for you help.
We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
9.the case替換 true
I dont think it is the case ( true ).
10.on替換as soon as
As soon as he arrived， he began his research. On his arrival， he began his research..
11.due to替換because of
He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.
12.cover替換walk/read
After covering (walking) 10 miles， we all felt tired.
13.contribute to替換 be helpful/useful
Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.
Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.
14.round the corner 替換 coming soon/ nearby
① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?
② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).
15.come to light替換discover
The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels.
The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.
16.have a ball替換have a good time/ enjoy oneself
After visiting the workshop， we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).
17.come up with替換think of
Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.
18.set aside替換save
Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
19.be of + n. 替換adj.
The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.
20.refer to 替換talk about/of， mention
The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.
高考英語(yǔ)作文一般滿分25分，如果作文達(dá)到19分，意味著已經(jīng)把好些考生拋在后面了，那如何拿到高分呢?
一. 首先看一下高考閱卷老師如何評(píng)分。
拿到你的作文，批卷老師大概讀一下，會(huì)在心中確立一個(gè)等級(jí)，一等是21分到25分，二等是16分到20分，三等是11分到15分......最要命的是，一旦老師心中確立了你的等級(jí)，就不愿意再更改了!也就是說(shuō)，接下來(lái)細(xì)看你作文寫得好壞，也只是在相應(yīng)等級(jí)內(nèi)變動(dòng)了! 所以說(shuō)，老師的一念之間，作文就會(huì)拉開等次!
這就要我們想盡一切辦法給老師留下一等文的第一印象!這樣，作文的分?jǐn)?shù)，一般只是在相應(yīng)等級(jí)內(nèi)變動(dòng)了。
二. 如何提升作文檔次
1.簡(jiǎn)單的改用一些單詞也會(huì)有意向不到的效果：如
用extraordinary代替very:十個(gè)人九個(gè)用very而你用extraordinary，那你不就與眾不同了嗎.
用significant代替important
用as a consequence代替as a result
用therefore代替so,舉個(gè)例子，I got up early，therefore i was late.
寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospital之類的形象詞。
簡(jiǎn)單的替換一下，水平立刻顯現(xiàn)出不一樣了
2.善用連接詞把短句改長(zhǎng)句
如，一個(gè)句子+逗號(hào)+however+另一個(gè)句子，這里面however是沒(méi)有實(shí)際意義的，就是表轉(zhuǎn)折，但你可以用這招把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句捏在一塊啊!短句子成長(zhǎng)句了!
都希望寫下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and，但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō)：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：Not only the furcoat is soft，but it is also warm.
◆其他連接詞：
表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，用 furthermore， what is more
表轉(zhuǎn)折：however/but 但是
表對(duì)比：not that but that不是而是/ one hand.on the other hand一方面另一 方面/ unlike與不同/not so much.as與其不如
表目的：for the.為了
表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以
表例證：for example
表假設(shè)：if 如果
表讓步：although雖然(注意：后不可接but!雖然但是不可這樣連用)/of course 當(dāng)然/clearly顯然
◆ 相關(guān)過(guò)渡語(yǔ)
1)表示時(shí)間順序： first， then， afterwards， meanwhile， later，first of all， finally， at last
2)表示空間順序： near， next to， far from， in front of， on the left， on one side
3)表示比較、對(duì)照： like， unlike， such as， but， however， on the other hand， on the contrary， nevertheless， otherwise
4)表示因果關(guān)系： because， for， as a result， therefore， thus
5)表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系： besides， whats more， what was worse， moreover， furthermore， in addition， on top of
6)表示并列關(guān)系： and， as well as， also
7)表示總結(jié)性： in general， in a word， in short， on the whole， to sum up， in brief， to conclude
3. 巧妙修改句式
舉個(gè)例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么說(shuō)?i not onle sing ，but also dance，改動(dòng)一下，not only do i sing，but also dance.倒裝句!
I think that...... 賓語(yǔ)從句，老師批10張卷子看到8張里面有I think that不煩嗎?如果一定要用賓語(yǔ)從句的話換一種說(shuō)法：I have a thought that......別看只改動(dòng)了一點(diǎn)，同位語(yǔ)從句!
同樣I hear that誰(shuí)都會(huì)用，不過(guò)同樣誰(shuí)都會(huì)用最好不要用!厲害一些的人會(huì)用：It is reported that...... 牛人會(huì)用There is a piece of news that 同樣的意思，但明顯比I hear that要帥!
還有一種用并列巨額代替定語(yǔ)從句，不僅可以用來(lái)湊字?jǐn)?shù)，還很醋。舉個(gè)例子，我喜歡玩籃球，然后籃球有很多種特點(diǎn)，就可以把這些特點(diǎn)用定語(yǔ)從句的形式并列出來(lái)：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is.......
還有種用法叫后置定語(yǔ)有人感覺挺難吧，其實(shí)記住個(gè)例子就行了，穿著比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini，變成a girls wearing a bikini就行了，這就是后置定語(yǔ)，很簡(jiǎn)單吧
最終的目的都是為了讓作文與眾不用，讓閱卷老師眼前一亮!
三.高考英語(yǔ)作文寫作時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)
1.減少誤拼
高考答題時(shí)，盡量別出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，要是比較長(zhǎng)的單詞拼錯(cuò)了還好說(shuō)，那種最簡(jiǎn)單的單詞千萬(wàn)不要拼錯(cuò)!扣的不是一分的問(wèn)題，有可能影響到等級(jí)。
2.注意卷面清爽，不要涂涂改改
現(xiàn)在高考改卷，是把每一塊分類用掃描儀掃描放到電腦里面。比如作文那一塊，會(huì)被單獨(dú)掃出來(lái)，放在電腦里以后，改卷的人看著投影儀上呈現(xiàn)出被放大了的段落，同時(shí)給出心里的分?jǐn)?shù)，按下想給的分?jǐn)?shù)。幾個(gè)人的分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)根據(jù)系統(tǒng)判斷，差別不大的話取平均值。差別大了，才會(huì)拉評(píng)分組組長(zhǎng)來(lái)看。(依舊是被屏幕放大了的字)。所以，字寫得好壞，一旦被放大，差別就不那么大了，最主要的是讓改試卷的看得清爽，眼睛不累。同時(shí)注意的是，最好不要涂涂改改，不然看起來(lái)覺得很不舒服，很麻煩。只要注意卷面清爽，就可以了。
五：最后分享一些可替換使用的單詞
1.occur 替換 think of
Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.
An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
2.devote替換spend
He spends all his spare time in reading.
He devotes all his spare time to reading.
3.seek替換want / look for
They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.
4.average 替換ordinary
Im an average ( ordinary ) student.
5.but替換very
The film we saw last night was very interesting.
The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.
The film we saw last night was anything but boring.
6.seat 替換sit
On his way to school， he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road， looking worried.
7.suppose 替換should
He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
8.appreciate 替換thank
Thank you very much for you help.
We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
9.the case替換 true
I dont think it is the case ( true ).
10.on替換as soon as
As soon as he arrived， he began his research. On his arrival， he began his research..
11.due to替換because of
He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.
12.cover替換walk/read
After covering (walking) 10 miles， we all felt tired.
13.contribute to替換 be helpful/useful
Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.
Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.
14.round the corner 替換 coming soon/ nearby
① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?
② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).
15.come to light替換discover
The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels.
The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.
16.have a ball替換have a good time/ enjoy oneself
After visiting the workshop， we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).
17.come up with替換think of
Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.
18.set aside替換save
Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
19.be of + n. 替換adj.
The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.
20.refer to 替換talk about/of， mention
The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.
