高中英語語法-英語書面表達的高分策略
英語書面表達的高分策略
高考英語書面表達題要求的詞數(shù)不多，只不過百余個詞，但卻能體現(xiàn)出考生的英語水平。一篇可讀性較強的作文一定能體現(xiàn)出作者扎實的語言基本功和駕馭語言的能力。下面以一篇書面表達為例，分三個方面談談如何才能做好書面表達題。
原題是：假設你是某中學生英文報的記者，對中學生課外上網(wǎng)的利弊進行調查采訪。以下是學生們對上網(wǎng)的看法。請你根據(jù)他們的觀點寫一篇簡要的調查報告，并呼吁同學們要正確使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。
使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的益處 使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的弊端
1. 信息資源豐富 1. 內容良莠不齊
2. 節(jié)省時間 2. 沉迷網(wǎng)絡游戲會影響學業(yè)
3. 方便交流和溝通 3. 過多使用會影響健康
一、使用簡潔多樣的句式
句式多樣化是指在一篇文章中要使用不同的句式。它可以使表達靈活多樣，使語言增色，有閃光點。句式多樣化是獲取高分的前提之一。例如在表達上述信息的文章中可以嘗試用以下句式或句子結構：
?。ㄒ唬秃暇?/p>
1. Theres no doubt that the Internet does us good. （句中含同位語從句）
2. The majority of students believe that they benefit a lot from the Internet. （句中含賓語從句）
3. As is known to all， once addicted to the noline games，the students can no longer concentrate on their studies. （句中含定語從句和省略的狀語從句）
4. Helpful as the computer is， some still hold the opinion that not everything on the Internet is good for us students. （句中含狀語從句和同位語從句）
?。ǘ┑寡b句
1. Never before could we easily find information with just a click.
2. Only with great care and under proper guidance will the students improve their studies and enjoy making new friends by surfing the Internet.
3. In spite of the increasing popularity and convenience that the Internet brings，by no means can people ignore its bad effects on teenagers.
?。ㄈ娬{結構
1. It is the Internet that makes the world much smaller.
2. Isnt it the Internet that provides people with a more convenient way of communication？
3. The Internet does enable people to communicate with each other more easily and quickly.
?。ㄋ模└袊@句
1. How hard some students find it to tear themselves away from computer games！
2. How convenient it is to use the computer！
?。ㄎ澹┨摂M語氣
1. As more and more students stay up surfing the Internet，it is high time that we discussed the problem.
2. Without the Internet，we would not have enjoyed our life so much.
3. Some people insist that teenagers be kept away from the Internet.
（六）非謂語動詞
1. We should try to make proper use of the computer，making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.
2. Being absorbed in the games， students may have difficulty in controlling themselves，leaving their homework undone.
3. Some students have their health damaged by burying themselves in the Internet.
此外，還可以嘗試使用獨立主格結構、 with 復合結構、反意疑問句、并列句、名言警句、被動結構等。清新簡潔的文字、靈活多變的語句能使文章的語言更加豐富多彩。
二、用詞要準確，要有特色
用詞準確是指用詞要適時適地，要貼切達意。同時恰當靈活地使用一些較高級的單詞和短語，能有效地提高表達的檔次，增添文章的色彩。例如在這篇書面表達中同學們可以用到以下較高級的詞匯：
do sb good/ harm， have ones health damaged， leave ones homework undone， benefit （ from ） ， be addicted to， concentrate on， provide， enable， absorbed in， have difficulty in tearing oneself away from， be kept away from， make proper use of， stay up， have a bad effect on， separate good plants from wild weeds， communicate with， under proper guidance， with the development of computer technology， in spite of the increasing popularity， by surfing the Internet， of great importance 等等。
三、用好過渡性詞語
用好過渡性詞語可以使整篇表達過渡自然，通順連貫。在這篇書面表達中同學們可以使用以下的過渡性詞語：
whats more， also， besides， in addition； worse still， whats worse， to make things worse； however； therefore， as a result； on the other hand， on the contrary； generally speaking 等。
當然，寫出一篇與眾不同的好文章非一日之功?？忌蛳略鷮嵉挠⒄Z基礎，培養(yǎng)良好的語感，有意識地積累詞匯和語言知識，反復進行強化練習，這樣才能運用自如，下筆如有神。
廣東易桂清
英語書面表達的高分策略
高考英語書面表達題要求的詞數(shù)不多，只不過百余個詞，但卻能體現(xiàn)出考生的英語水平。一篇可讀性較強的作文一定能體現(xiàn)出作者扎實的語言基本功和駕馭語言的能力。下面以一篇書面表達為例，分三個方面談談如何才能做好書面表達題。
原題是：假設你是某中學生英文報的記者，對中學生課外上網(wǎng)的利弊進行調查采訪。以下是學生們對上網(wǎng)的看法。請你根據(jù)他們的觀點寫一篇簡要的調查報告，并呼吁同學們要正確使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。
使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的益處 使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的弊端
1. 信息資源豐富 1. 內容良莠不齊
2. 節(jié)省時間 2. 沉迷網(wǎng)絡游戲會影響學業(yè)
3. 方便交流和溝通 3. 過多使用會影響健康
一、使用簡潔多樣的句式
句式多樣化是指在一篇文章中要使用不同的句式。它可以使表達靈活多樣，使語言增色，有閃光點。句式多樣化是獲取高分的前提之一。例如在表達上述信息的文章中可以嘗試用以下句式或句子結構：
?。ㄒ唬秃暇?/p>
1. Theres no doubt that the Internet does us good. （句中含同位語從句）
2. The majority of students believe that they benefit a lot from the Internet. （句中含賓語從句）
3. As is known to all， once addicted to the noline games，the students can no longer concentrate on their studies. （句中含定語從句和省略的狀語從句）
4. Helpful as the computer is， some still hold the opinion that not everything on the Internet is good for us students. （句中含狀語從句和同位語從句）
?。ǘ┑寡b句
1. Never before could we easily find information with just a click.
2. Only with great care and under proper guidance will the students improve their studies and enjoy making new friends by surfing the Internet.
3. In spite of the increasing popularity and convenience that the Internet brings，by no means can people ignore its bad effects on teenagers.
（三）強調結構
1. It is the Internet that makes the world much smaller.
2. Isnt it the Internet that provides people with a more convenient way of communication？
3. The Internet does enable people to communicate with each other more easily and quickly.
?。ㄋ模└袊@句
1. How hard some students find it to tear themselves away from computer games！
2. How convenient it is to use the computer！
?。ㄎ澹┨摂M語氣
1. As more and more students stay up surfing the Internet，it is high time that we discussed the problem.
2. Without the Internet，we would not have enjoyed our life so much.
3. Some people insist that teenagers be kept away from the Internet.
（六）非謂語動詞
1. We should try to make proper use of the computer，making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.
2. Being absorbed in the games， students may have difficulty in controlling themselves，leaving their homework undone.
3. Some students have their health damaged by burying themselves in the Internet.
此外，還可以嘗試使用獨立主格結構、 with 復合結構、反意疑問句、并列句、名言警句、被動結構等。清新簡潔的文字、靈活多變的語句能使文章的語言更加豐富多彩。
二、用詞要準確，要有特色
用詞準確是指用詞要適時適地，要貼切達意。同時恰當靈活地使用一些較高級的單詞和短語，能有效地提高表達的檔次，增添文章的色彩。例如在這篇書面表達中同學們可以用到以下較高級的詞匯：
do sb good/ harm， have ones health damaged， leave ones homework undone， benefit （ from ） ， be addicted to， concentrate on， provide， enable， absorbed in， have difficulty in tearing oneself away from， be kept away from， make proper use of， stay up， have a bad effect on， separate good plants from wild weeds， communicate with， under proper guidance， with the development of computer technology， in spite of the increasing popularity， by surfing the Internet， of great importance 等等。
三、用好過渡性詞語
用好過渡性詞語可以使整篇表達過渡自然，通順連貫。在這篇書面表達中同學們可以使用以下的過渡性詞語：
whats more， also， besides， in addition； worse still， whats worse， to make things worse； however； therefore， as a result； on the other hand， on the contrary； generally speaking 等。
當然，寫出一篇與眾不同的好文章非一日之功。考生要打下扎實的英語基礎，培養(yǎng)良好的語感，有意識地積累詞匯和語言知識，反復進行強化練習，這樣才能運用自如，下筆如有神。
廣東易桂清
