高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達15

　　浙江省溫州市十校聯合體2024屆高三上學期期末考試英語試題

　　【題文】請根據上面圖畫所反應的現象和問題，寫一篇100—120個詞的短文。你的短文應該包括：

　　1、 描述這幅圖。

　　2、 說明反映的問題。

　　3、 闡述你對這個問題的看法。

　　注意：短文的開頭已經給出。（不計入總詞數）

　　As we can see in the picture，________________________________________________

　　As we can see in the picture, Xiaoming is busy with his homework while his mother is fanning him to make him cool and comfortable.

　　The picture implies the parents are indulgent with their children. For example, like the picture, they do everything for their children to create a good opportunity for their children to involve in their study, which most children are willing to accept.

　　I don’t approve of what the parents do. Surely there comes a time when everyone has to leave the parental nest, look after themselves and pay their own way in life. Therefore, the parents are required to be aware that a great love and concern means providing a good chance for their children to fly higher instead of spoiling or restricting them. Certainly it’s better to take action now.

　　【解析】

　　【考點】表明自己的觀點—漫畫作文

　　【寫作指導】1.本次寫作任務是漫畫作文，實際上是半開放寫作。因為學生有很大的發揮空間。漫畫作文常規上以三個層面或段落來完成：敘述圖畫；分析圖畫；提出建議。時態宜用一般現在時，有些地方要用適當的情態動詞，should，ought to，must，can等。

　　As is shown in the picture……. The picture tells us now….

　　The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with,…. And this social problem should arouse the great concern of all in the world.

　　In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First,…Only in this way can we solve the problem of…

　　【一句多譯】

　　1. 介紹畫面內容時可使用: As we can see from the picture,

　　According to the picture/From the picture,we can see....

　　The picture shows that...

　　Picture 1/The first picture shows/tells us that...

　　Picture 2/The second picture shows/tells us that....

　　2. 介紹畫面內容的現實意義時可使用: This kind of phenomenon is very common in life/society.

　　We can often see this kind of phenomenon in life/society.

　　This kind of matter often happens in our life/society.

　　3. 對社會現象進行評論時可使用: We should realize the importance/harm of (doing) something.

　　We should try hard to improve...

　　We should promote the awareness that....

　　We should promote the awareness of(doing)something.

　　We should promote the public awareness of(doing) something.

　　I think it’s our duty to do something.

　　4. 呼吁(有關部門)采取措施解決社會問題時可使用: I appeal to our government/parents/teachers to take action/measures/steps to....

　　We must take measures/action/steps to....

　　浙江省杭州市學軍中學2024屆高三第九次月考英語

　　【題文】書面表達(滿分30分)

　　假設你是王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請根據下列要點，用英文給李華寫一篇畢業留言。要點：1. 簡要表述李華在你心目中的印象；

　　2. 用一到兩個相關的事例進行具體描述；

　　3. 對李華表示美好的的祝愿。

　　注意：1. 內容積極向上，語意連貫，結構完整。詞數120左右。

　　2. 不能寫成詩歌形式；不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　3. 開頭已給出。

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　It’s time to say goodbye. _______________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　陜西省渭南市2024屆高三第二次模擬考試英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分30分）

　　請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap（收獲）.”

　　注意事項：

　　1. 無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示；

　　2. 除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　3. 不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱;

　　4. 短文詞數不少于100；

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　　【答案】書面表達（滿分30分）

　　One possible version：

　　Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”

　　I failed in the last exam. So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything. I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. Later on, I found things got even worse. Meanwhile, a great many students made every effort to study. Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates. Now I’m progressing in my studies. I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually.

　　My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.

　　北京市重點中學2024屆高三上學期第一次月考英語試題

　　【題文】

　　情景作文

　　假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華。今天是你父親的生日，你給父親買完生日蛋糕后，在回家途中做了幾件好事。請根據圖片的先后順序，寫一篇英文日記，介紹事情的全過程。 ?注意：1．日記的開頭已為你寫好。 ?

　　2．詞數不少于60。

　　March 23, Friday?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Sunny ?

　　Today is Dad's birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift.

　　______________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning. I found my mother wasn't feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

　　【解析】

　　這幾件事看似很簡單，但是要想把文章寫好，寫的連貫，自然，要求考生要在給出的圖片信息中撲捉到有用的信息，有時候要適當的進行擴充才行，不如第二、第三幅圖，需要考生根據自己的生活經驗，做出合理的補充，是文章的內容充實而又自然，同時要注重文章的結構，前后時態、動作要做到一致，連貫。總之，把沒一幅圖吃透，加上合理聯想，還是可以寫出優秀的作文的

　　2024高考真題英語（重慶卷）

　　【題文】請結合材料，按要求用英文寫作。

　　“ My friend falls, I laugh ； my phone falls, I cry. ”

　　要求:(1)就此材料發表你的看法；

　　(2)緊扣材料,有明確的觀點；(3)詞數不少于60;

　　(4)在答題卡上作答。【考點】考察開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文屬于開放性作文，根據材料：My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls , I cry. “朋友摔倒了，我笑了。我的手機摔了，我哭了”。這句話說明現在人們過度使用手機，而忽略了現實生活中的友誼。可以寫成議論文，討論手機過對使用，影響現實交流。使用一般現在時和第三人稱。要點：1.現在人們過度使用手機，忽視了現實中人與人之間的交流，產生了很多的問題。2反對過分使用手機，鼓勵人們積極參加各種活動，在現實中與更多的人交流。

　　緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

　　【一句多譯】

　　人們濫用手機，忽視了現實生活中與他人的聯系。

　　People abuse mobile phones, which makes them ignore the true relationship with their friends.

　　【參考范文】

　　（略）

　　高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達15

　　浙江省溫州市十校聯合體2024屆高三上學期期末考試英語試題

　　【題文】請根據上面圖畫所反應的現象和問題，寫一篇100—120個詞的短文。你的短文應該包括：

　　1、 描述這幅圖。

　　2、 說明反映的問題。

　　3、 闡述你對這個問題的看法。

　　注意：短文的開頭已經給出。（不計入總詞數）

　　As we can see in the picture，________________________________________________

　　As we can see in the picture, Xiaoming is busy with his homework while his mother is fanning him to make him cool and comfortable.

　　The picture implies the parents are indulgent with their children. For example, like the picture, they do everything for their children to create a good opportunity for their children to involve in their study, which most children are willing to accept.

　　I don’t approve of what the parents do. Surely there comes a time when everyone has to leave the parental nest, look after themselves and pay their own way in life. Therefore, the parents are required to be aware that a great love and concern means providing a good chance for their children to fly higher instead of spoiling or restricting them. Certainly it’s better to take action now.

　　【解析】

　　【考點】表明自己的觀點—漫畫作文

　　【寫作指導】1.本次寫作任務是漫畫作文，實際上是半開放寫作。因為學生有很大的發揮空間。漫畫作文常規上以三個層面或段落來完成：敘述圖畫；分析圖畫；提出建議。時態宜用一般現在時，有些地方要用適當的情態動詞，should，ought to，must，can等。

　　As is shown in the picture……. The picture tells us now….

　　The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with,…. And this social problem should arouse the great concern of all in the world.

　　In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First,…Only in this way can we solve the problem of…

　　【一句多譯】

　　1. 介紹畫面內容時可使用: As we can see from the picture,

　　According to the picture/From the picture,we can see....

　　The picture shows that...

　　Picture 1/The first picture shows/tells us that...

　　Picture 2/The second picture shows/tells us that....

　　2. 介紹畫面內容的現實意義時可使用: This kind of phenomenon is very common in life/society.

　　We can often see this kind of phenomenon in life/society.

　　This kind of matter often happens in our life/society.

　　3. 對社會現象進行評論時可使用: We should realize the importance/harm of (doing) something.

　　We should try hard to improve...

　　We should promote the awareness that....

　　We should promote the awareness of(doing)something.

　　We should promote the public awareness of(doing) something.

　　I think it’s our duty to do something.

　　4. 呼吁(有關部門)采取措施解決社會問題時可使用: I appeal to our government/parents/teachers to take action/measures/steps to....

　　We must take measures/action/steps to....

　　浙江省杭州市學軍中學2024屆高三第九次月考英語

　　【題文】書面表達(滿分30分)

　　假設你是王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請根據下列要點，用英文給李華寫一篇畢業留言。要點：1. 簡要表述李華在你心目中的印象；

　　2. 用一到兩個相關的事例進行具體描述；

　　3. 對李華表示美好的的祝愿。

　　注意：1. 內容積極向上，語意連貫，結構完整。詞數120左右。

　　2. 不能寫成詩歌形式；不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　3. 開頭已給出。

　　Dear Li Hua,

　　It’s time to say goodbye. _______________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　陜西省渭南市2024屆高三第二次模擬考試英語

　　【題文】書面表達（滿分30分）

　　請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap（收獲）.”

　　注意事項：

　　1. 無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示；

　　2. 除詩歌外，文體不限；

　　3. 不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱;

　　4. 短文詞數不少于100；

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　　【答案】書面表達（滿分30分）

　　One possible version：

　　Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”

　　I failed in the last exam. So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything. I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. Later on, I found things got even worse. Meanwhile, a great many students made every effort to study. Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates. Now I’m progressing in my studies. I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually.

　　My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.

　　北京市重點中學2024屆高三上學期第一次月考英語試題

　　【題文】

　　情景作文

　　假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華。今天是你父親的生日，你給父親買完生日蛋糕后，在回家途中做了幾件好事。請根據圖片的先后順序，寫一篇英文日記，介紹事情的全過程。 ?注意：1．日記的開頭已為你寫好。 ?

　　2．詞數不少于60。

　　March 23, Friday?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Sunny ?

　　Today is Dad's birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift.

　　______________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning. I found my mother wasn't feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

　　【解析】

　　這幾件事看似很簡單，但是要想把文章寫好，寫的連貫，自然，要求考生要在給出的圖片信息中撲捉到有用的信息，有時候要適當的進行擴充才行，不如第二、第三幅圖，需要考生根據自己的生活經驗，做出合理的補充，是文章的內容充實而又自然，同時要注重文章的結構，前后時態、動作要做到一致，連貫。總之，把沒一幅圖吃透，加上合理聯想，還是可以寫出優秀的作文的

　　2024高考真題英語（重慶卷）

　　【題文】請結合材料，按要求用英文寫作。

　　“ My friend falls, I laugh ； my phone falls, I cry. ”

　　要求:(1)就此材料發表你的看法；

　　(2)緊扣材料,有明確的觀點；(3)詞數不少于60;

　　(4)在答題卡上作答。【考點】考察開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文屬于開放性作文，根據材料：My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls , I cry. “朋友摔倒了，我笑了。我的手機摔了，我哭了”。這句話說明現在人們過度使用手機，而忽略了現實生活中的友誼。可以寫成議論文，討論手機過對使用，影響現實交流。使用一般現在時和第三人稱。要點：1.現在人們過度使用手機，忽視了現實中人與人之間的交流，產生了很多的問題。2反對過分使用手機，鼓勵人們積極參加各種活動，在現實中與更多的人交流。

　　緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

　　【一句多譯】

　　人們濫用手機，忽視了現實生活中與他人的聯系。

　　People abuse mobile phones, which makes them ignore the true relationship with their friends.

　　【參考范文】

　　（略）