2024高考英語二輪書面表達訓(xùn)練：話題作文（22）
訓(xùn)練（22）及參考范文
你校學(xué)生會需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語學(xué)習(xí)顧問，請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容主要包括：
——母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先
——解答用語學(xué)習(xí)問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動
——每周4小時，報酬面議
——聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel:13011223344）
注意：1。詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.啟事標語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
五、One Possible Version
English Advisor Wanted
The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English. Answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.
The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
Student Union
【預(yù)測試題l】向雷鋒學(xué)習(xí)——【看圖寫話】【日記應(yīng)用文】
1、為了響應(yīng)毛主席提出的“向雷鋒同志學(xué)習(xí)”的號召，配合“交通安全”的宣傳活動，光明中學(xué)組織子一次到某汽車站的學(xué)雷鋒活動。請根據(jù)以下6幅圖畫，用英語寫一篇日記。
記敘類看圖寫話以記敘為主，兼有少量的議論。做此類題的，學(xué)生一定要根據(jù)圖畫，寫出圖畫中活動的時間、地點、環(huán)境及活動內(nèi)容，幾幅圖畫要兼顧，切忌過多描寫或忽視某一圖畫的內(nèi)容，文章結(jié)尾可適當(dāng)扦發(fā)一下自己的情感，以達到畫龍點睛的效果。
1、這是一篇記敘一天活動的日記。文章用第一人稱。時態(tài)主要用過去時。
2、寫作要點：（1）時間、地點、事件：（2）活動情況；（3）回家的時間及活動后的感受。
March 5. 2024
Monday
Fine
Forty-nine years ago, Chairman Mao called on us to learn from Comrade Lei Feng. To mark the occasion, we organized an activity at a nearby bus station today.
At 8 o'clock in the mowing, we arrived at the 712 bus station, where we were warmly welcomed by the drivers and conductors.
Then we broke up into several groups. Some of us taught some drivers and conductors English, while others cleaned buses. Still others directed traffic at the crossroads near the bus station and helped the elderly cross the street.
Staff members of the bus station and our classmates then took part in a general knowledge quiz on the traffic safety in the fternoon, which was great fun for both sides. Around four o'clock, we said goodbye to one another, and felt very happy on the way home.
Today's activity has taught us the new meaning of the spirit of Lei Feng: sharing with others what you have---your time, energy, or knowledge--makes you feel warm in your heart. It makes a difference in how I feel about myself
（1）寫作模板
首段：概括交代事件發(fā)生的時間＼地點＼人物等信息；
交代時間常用表達：One day,…：The other day,…
Last week，…At 8 o'clock…
交代地點常用表達：in my office／in…；on the way to…
交代時間地點與相關(guān)人物的句型：sb．was doing sth．when sth．／sb．did sth;
時間＋was memorable because sb. did sth.: This particular day began at ＋時間點＋in the morning / afternoon / evening in＋地點
中心段：交待細節(jié)，注重解決有關(guān)“how”的問題。交待細節(jié)時應(yīng)注意過多不必要的細節(jié)會沖淡文章的主題口因此，在細節(jié)的選擇上應(yīng)注意選擇與主題密切相關(guān)的內(nèi)容，從而深化文章主題。
推動情節(jié)發(fā)展常用表達：then, suddenly, immediately, no sooner...than..., hardly/scarcely...when..., while, when, as, not until... 等.
結(jié)尾段：介紹故事的結(jié)局或談自己的感想，可適當(dāng)發(fā)表一點議論：
表結(jié)局常用表達：At last / Finally, ...; However, ... Luckily / Fortunately, ... ; To one's surprise, ...
表感想常用表達：Personally, I think that...; I learn from the story that...: I think that this unforgettable and unusual experience will be fresh on my mind forever.
訓(xùn)練（22）及參考范文
你校學(xué)生會需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語學(xué)習(xí)顧問，請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容主要包括：
——母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先
——解答用語學(xué)習(xí)問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動
——每周4小時，報酬面議
——聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel:13011223344）
注意：1。詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.啟事標語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
五、One Possible Version
English Advisor Wanted
The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English. Answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.
The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.
If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
Student Union
【預(yù)測試題l】向雷鋒學(xué)習(xí)——【看圖寫話】【日記應(yīng)用文】
1、為了響應(yīng)毛主席提出的“向雷鋒同志學(xué)習(xí)”的號召，配合“交通安全”的宣傳活動，光明中學(xué)組織子一次到某汽車站的學(xué)雷鋒活動。請根據(jù)以下6幅圖畫，用英語寫一篇日記。
記敘類看圖寫話以記敘為主，兼有少量的議論。做此類題的，學(xué)生一定要根據(jù)圖畫，寫出圖畫中活動的時間、地點、環(huán)境及活動內(nèi)容，幾幅圖畫要兼顧，切忌過多描寫或忽視某一圖畫的內(nèi)容，文章結(jié)尾可適當(dāng)扦發(fā)一下自己的情感，以達到畫龍點睛的效果。
1、這是一篇記敘一天活動的日記。文章用第一人稱。時態(tài)主要用過去時。
2、寫作要點：（1）時間、地點、事件：（2）活動情況；（3）回家的時間及活動后的感受。
March 5. 2024
Monday
Fine
Forty-nine years ago, Chairman Mao called on us to learn from Comrade Lei Feng. To mark the occasion, we organized an activity at a nearby bus station today.
At 8 o'clock in the mowing, we arrived at the 712 bus station, where we were warmly welcomed by the drivers and conductors.
Then we broke up into several groups. Some of us taught some drivers and conductors English, while others cleaned buses. Still others directed traffic at the crossroads near the bus station and helped the elderly cross the street.
Staff members of the bus station and our classmates then took part in a general knowledge quiz on the traffic safety in the fternoon, which was great fun for both sides. Around four o'clock, we said goodbye to one another, and felt very happy on the way home.
Today's activity has taught us the new meaning of the spirit of Lei Feng: sharing with others what you have---your time, energy, or knowledge--makes you feel warm in your heart. It makes a difference in how I feel about myself
（1）寫作模板
首段：概括交代事件發(fā)生的時間＼地點＼人物等信息；
交代時間常用表達：One day,…：The other day,…
Last week，…At 8 o'clock…
交代地點常用表達：in my office／in…；on the way to…
交代時間地點與相關(guān)人物的句型：sb．was doing sth．when sth．／sb．did sth;
時間＋was memorable because sb. did sth.: This particular day began at ＋時間點＋in the morning / afternoon / evening in＋地點
中心段：交待細節(jié)，注重解決有關(guān)“how”的問題。交待細節(jié)時應(yīng)注意過多不必要的細節(jié)會沖淡文章的主題口因此，在細節(jié)的選擇上應(yīng)注意選擇與主題密切相關(guān)的內(nèi)容，從而深化文章主題。
推動情節(jié)發(fā)展常用表達：then, suddenly, immediately, no sooner...than..., hardly/scarcely...when..., while, when, as, not until... 等.
結(jié)尾段：介紹故事的結(jié)局或談自己的感想，可適當(dāng)發(fā)表一點議論：
表結(jié)局常用表達：At last / Finally, ...; However, ... Luckily / Fortunately, ... ; To one's surprise, ...
表感想常用表達：Personally, I think that...; I learn from the story that...: I think that this unforgettable and unusual experience will be fresh on my mind forever.
