成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（10）附參考范文

　　高考英語書面表達講義：健康幸福話題作文

　　例1： 根據下面提示，寫一篇《財富與快樂》的短文。

　　(1)一些人認為財富能帶來快樂。

　　(2)另一些人認為錢多了不是一件好事。

　　(3)提出自己的看法。

　　注意：單詞數120個左右。

　　Wealth and Happiness

　　Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。

　　But some people believe wealth can't bring them happiness. For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!

　　In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not everything。

　　例2：

　　最近，你班同學展開了一場討論，主題是：Wealth & Health。請你根據下表提供的信息，寫一篇100詞左右的文章，介紹一下你們討論的情況。

　　一些人認為財富更重要一些人認為健康更重要

　　1.沒有錢萬萬不行

　　2. 想辦法多掙錢

　　1. 健康是本錢

　　2. 要愛惜身體

　　個人看法：更看重健康。身體不好，錢再多也無濟于事。

　　Wealth & Health

　　Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.

　　Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing. In order to accumulate more money they can do anything. However, other people regard health as more important. Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.

　　As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more. Everybody wants to live a happy life. So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless.

　　In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy. So, just do our best to keep healthy.

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　　仔細觀察下面圖畫，請你給China Daily寫一篇100字左右的短文，描述一下你在路上所見的事，并就騎車人--李平的行為，簡單闡明自己的感想。

　　參考范文

　　One Possible Version

　　One day Li Ping was riding fast when she suddenly saw an old woman before her. But it was too late to stop immediately. The old woman was knocked down. Li Pin didn't help her. Instead, she scolded her and rode away.

　　When Li Ping stopped her bicycle, she was surprised to find her new shoes missing. She hurried back and found the old woman there holding her shoes in her hands. She was sorry for what she had done and apologized to the woman.

　　From this, I learned everybody should be kind to each other. Never do as Li Pin did to the old, or you will feel greatly sorry.

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　　高考英語觀點類

　　1.正反觀點式議論文模板

　　導入：

　　第1段：（導入話題）

　　（觀點有分歧）

　　正文：

　　第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方觀點）

　　.(列出2~3個贊成的理由)

　　第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. （反方觀點）

　　(列出2~3個反對的理由)

　　結論：

　　第4段：

　　（個人觀點）

　　2.觀點論述類議論文模板：

　　導入：

　　第1段：提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題

　　As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對）

　　The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （過渡句，承上啟下）

　　正文：

　　第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3個贊成或反對的理由)

　　結論：

　　第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... （照應第1段，構成"總—分—總"結構）

　　段首句.

　　導入：

　　1

　　No one can doubt the essential fact that

　　over the last years has caused wide public concern all over the world.

　　人

　　in increasing numbers are beginning to believe that

　　沒有人能否認這一重要事實：最近幾年？？問題在全世界受到了普遍關注。越來越多的？？開始相信這種狀況將

　　2

　　There is a general debate today over the phenomenon of ————————

　　3

　　When it comes to education,----------------------說到~~~

　　4

　　There’s no denying the fact that...-----------.事實不容否認----------

　　5

　　______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. …已成為人的關注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發激烈的辯論。

　　6

　　There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

　　無可否認，我們的生活品質已經每況愈下。

　　7

　　There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

　　毫無疑問，我們的教育制度令人不滿意。

　　8

　　Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.

　　雖然我們的國家很富有，但是我們的生活質量卻令人很不滿意。

　　9

　　.It goes without saying that... 不用說...(意思是：論述的內容是顯而易見的）意見分歧：

　　1

　　No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

　　沒有一項發明像互聯網一樣同時受到如此多的贊揚和批評。

　　2

　　______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用，它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時也引發一些嚴重的問題。

　　3

　　Many people believe that-------- produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote-----------------------

　　4

　　People differ in their attitudes towards failure. Faced with it, some of them ------. Others, however,-------人們對失敗持有不同的態度。面對失敗，有人------，。然而，另一些人卻------

　　5

　　To average people, they often tend to live under the illusion that——————, is this really the case?對于一般人來說，他們常常以為————，然而這是真的嗎？

　　6

　　There is a growing tendency for sb to ----越來越多的人··

　　——人——seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward —————

　　An increasing number of experts believe that will exert positive effects on———

　　However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more ------who complain that ———have brought many serious problems越來越多的 --相信-----起到積極作用。然而，越來越多的----卻懷疑這種說法，他們抱怨--了許多嚴重的問題

　　8

　　What calls for special attention is that...需要引起特別注意的是...

　　科技發展:

　　With the opening and reform policy being carried out, thousands upon thousands of foreign visitors are crowding into our country. They are eager to see this old mysterious land with a splendid culture of more than 5,000years.?I隨著改革開放政策的貫徹執行，數以萬計的外國游人涌入中國。他們渴望參觀這個有著5000多年燦爛文化的神秘古國。

　　In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

　　中間段落句

　　1

　　---人---tend to have a favorable attitude toward ------

　　2

　　Using bicycle contributes greatly to people’s physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

　　使用自行車有助于人們的身體健康，并極大地緩解了交通阻塞。

　　3

　　The harder you work, the more progress you make.你越努力，你越進步。

　　4

　　Many people seem to overlook the basic fact:許多人似乎忽視了這個基本事實：

　　5 Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.聽音樂能使我們放松。

　　6 On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge

　　我們絕對不能忽視知識的價值。

　　7 There is no one but longs to.------人們都希望------ So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.時間是如此珍貴，我們不能浪費它。

　　結尾句

　　From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although ——indeed bring us many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn’t be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. 通過以上討論，我們可以得出結論：盡管----很多優點，但它的缺點不可忽視，且遠大于它的優點。

　　From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____

　　.綜上所述，我們可以清楚地得出結論……

　　It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view,I find----

　　在總體上很難說……是好還是壞，因為它在很大程度上取決于……的形勢。然而，就我個人而言，我發現…

　　個人觀點:

　　As for me, I’m in favor of the opinion that ———for the following reasons: 就我而言，我同意

　　觀點。

　　As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.

　　I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.

　　完全同意……這種觀點（陳述），主要理由如下：

　　But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.

　　但是，……和……都有它們各自的優勢（好處）。例如，……，而……。然而，把這兩者相比較，我更傾向于（喜歡）……

　　號召：In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

　　總而言之，整個社會應該密切關注……這個問題。只有這樣，我們才能在將來……

　　隨著社會的發展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每個人都愿為社會貢獻自已的一份力量，這個社會將要變得越來越好。

　　With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

　　嚴重影響社會秩序

　　seriously disturb social order

　　促進經濟和社會發展

　　to promote economic

　　對健康有好處

　　make for good health

　　對健康有危害

　　a hazard to health

　　破壞環境、污染環境

　　poisoning the environment

　　環境保護

　　protect the environment

　　浪費時間、浪費金錢、浪費精力

　　a waste of money,time and energy

　　促進學習

　　facilitating learning

　　影響學習

　　influnce one's study

　　提高自身水平

　　upgrade oneself

　　反對

　　disapproval

　　贊成

　　in favor of

　　★ 形容詞：

　　1. 貧窮的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken

　　2. 富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off

　　3. 優秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding

　　4. 積極的，好的：good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous

　　5. 消極的，不良的：bad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable

　　6. 明顯的：obvious = apparent = evident =manifest

　　7. 健康的: healthy = robust = sound = wholesome

　　8. 驚人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous

　　9. 美麗的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching

　　10. 有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous =animated

　　11. 流行的： popular = prevailing = prevalent= pervasive

　　★ 動詞：

　　1. 提高，加強：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize

　　2 減輕: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten

　　3. 解決：solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with

　　4. 拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate

　　5. 培養: develop = cultivate = foster = nurture

　　6. 激發，鼓勵：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur

　　7. 認為： think = assert= hold = claim = argue

　　8. 完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve

　　9. 保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold

　　10. 有害于：destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize

　　★ 名詞：

　　1. 影響：influence= impact

　　2. 危險：danger = perils =hazard

　　3. 污染：pollution = contamination4. 人類：human beings= mankind = human race

　　5. 老人： old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens

　　6. 幸福：happiness = cheerfulness = well-being

　　7. 老師：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers

　　8. 教育：education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing

　　9. 青少年：young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents

　　10. 優點：advantage = merits = superiority = virtue

　　11. 責任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability

　　12. 能力： ability = capacity = power = skill

　　13. 職業： job = career = employment = profession

　　14. 娛樂： enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment

　　15. 孩子： children = offspring = descendant= kid

　　★ 短語：

　　1. 充滿了：be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with

　　2. 努力：struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for

　　3. 從事： embark on = take up = set about = go in for

　　4. 在當代: in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age