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英語六級考前熱點高分范文四

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英語六級考前熱點高分范文四

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:  1)很多大學里占座現象十分普遍  2)這種現象會帶來哪些影響  3)你對此的看法  Reserving a Seat _______________________________________________________________________________  _______________________________________________________________________________  _______________________________________________________________________________  行文思路  本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象,提綱第2點要求分析該現象帶來的影響,提綱第3點要求談談我對該現象的看法。  根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:描述大學生在教室和圖書館占座的現象;闡述這種現象帶來的不良影響;談談我對占座現象的看法。  高分范文  Reserving a Seat  We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, [1]indicating the seat is taken. This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this for granted, and few will protest it.  [4]Though most of students taking seats in advance is for the purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat [7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others are eager for that seat.  [9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon reserving a seat.  【亮點點評】  [1]表示,現在分詞短語作伴隨狀語。  [2]非常奇怪的是,副詞使用恰當。  [3]認為理所當然。  [4]though引導讓步狀語從句,引出對不良影響的闡述。  [5]過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。  [7]違背了公平原則。  [8]no matter +疑問詞表示無論,不管,引導讓步狀語從句。  [9]用于得出結論。considering用作介詞,意為考慮到,鑒于。  [10]用于引出解決辦法,表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為早該是的時候了。  佳句臨摹  1.佳句:Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.  臨摹:即使要花費更多的錢,父母仍然愿意送他們的獨生子女去更好的學校。  ___________________________________________________________________________.  2.佳句:No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you.  臨摹:有了私家車,不管天氣如何,也不管什么時候出門,人們都可以帶孩子或父母去任何地方。  ___________________________________________________________________________.  3.佳句:  Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.  臨摹:鑒于以上所述,我認為,加強對大學生的心理輔導是當務之急。  ___________________________________________________________________________.  【KEY】  1. Parents are willing to send their only child to better schools even if it costs more.  2. With private cars, people can take their children or elder parents anywhere, no matter what the weather is like and no matter when they go out.  3. Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time for us to strengthen the psychological instruction on college students.

  

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:  1)很多大學里占座現象十分普遍  2)這種現象會帶來哪些影響  3)你對此的看法  Reserving a Seat _______________________________________________________________________________  _______________________________________________________________________________  _______________________________________________________________________________  行文思路  本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象,提綱第2點要求分析該現象帶來的影響,提綱第3點要求談談我對該現象的看法。  根據所給提綱,本文應包含如下內容:描述大學生在教室和圖書館占座的現象;闡述這種現象帶來的不良影響;談談我對占座現象的看法。  高分范文  Reserving a Seat  We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, [1]indicating the seat is taken. This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this for granted, and few will protest it.  [4]Though most of students taking seats in advance is for the purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat [7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others are eager for that seat.  [9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon reserving a seat.  【亮點點評】  [1]表示,現在分詞短語作伴隨狀語。  [2]非常奇怪的是,副詞使用恰當。  [3]認為理所當然。  [4]though引導讓步狀語從句,引出對不良影響的闡述。  [5]過渡銜接詞語,使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。  [7]違背了公平原則。  [8]no matter +疑問詞表示無論,不管,引導讓步狀語從句。  [9]用于得出結論。considering用作介詞,意為考慮到,鑒于。  [10]用于引出解決辦法,表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為早該是的時候了。  佳句臨摹  1.佳句:Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.  臨摹:即使要花費更多的錢,父母仍然愿意送他們的獨生子女去更好的學校。  ___________________________________________________________________________.  2.佳句:No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you.  臨摹:有了私家車,不管天氣如何,也不管什么時候出門,人們都可以帶孩子或父母去任何地方。  ___________________________________________________________________________.  3.佳句:  Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.  臨摹:鑒于以上所述,我認為,加強對大學生的心理輔導是當務之急。  ___________________________________________________________________________.  【KEY】  1. Parents are willing to send their only child to better schools even if it costs more.  2. With private cars, people can take their children or elder parents anywhere, no matter what the weather is like and no matter when they go out.  3. Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time for us to strengthen the psychological instruction on college students.

  

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